1 雅思大作文写作怎么写
在雅思写作中,一切的写作技巧都不如对写作的细节把握。在平时的写作练习中,考生可以根据雅思写作评分标准来衡量自己的写作水平,下面是小编搜集整理的关于雅思大作文写作怎么写的资料,欢迎查阅。
一:拒绝无谓的单词和词组
1.一些不必要的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。
比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。
2.替换无聊的表达,故意写出复杂的长难句,但是让整个句子显得特别冗长,其实并不会给你的雅思作文加分。
例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。
二:拒绝重复词汇和表达
1.雅思写作评分标准中有一点:丰富性。很多考生做不到在写作中使用更丰富的词汇和表达,也就与高分失之交臂。有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。
例如下面这个例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。
large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。
更简洁的表达方式为:
My grandfather grew up on a large farm。
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换
例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
2 雅思大作文开头该怎样写
一:名人名言
有的同学可能会问,我平时没有准备名人名言怎么办。其实很好办,你可以自己编啊。因为我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理。
举个例子:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
附赠大家一个经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
二:数字统计
如果你想要你的雅思大作文更有说服力的话,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候大家就不用管那么多,只要有东西写就ok了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
上面这句话看起来这个数字还挺有说服力的,其实都是编造出来的,所以,如果大家在雅思大作文需要一些数字而自己又不清楚的话,你就可以编了。
3 雅思小作文类型归类
一般来说,雅思小作文都是图表作文,当然,图表的类型主要有五大类,这五大类是:表格图,曲线图,柱状图,饼状图和综合图五大类。
这五大雅思小作文图表类型的出题频次如下:
一般来说,柱图和曲线图是每月常考的题型,有时候会有连考或者交替考的趋势。
饼图和表格题也是相对频率较高的题型。偶尔也会考综合题。
综合图图表主要分为流程图和地图题,一般每季度轮换题库的时候会出现。不管考到哪种题型,其要求都是一致的,先要挑选重要数值并且在相关处作比较。
五大雅思小作文类型的写作要点:
一、表格图图表作文的写作要点
1 横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势。
2 不需要将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值。
3 最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的。
二、曲线图图表作文的写作要点
1 极点说明。即,对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明。
2 趋势说明。即,对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平。
3 交点说明。即,对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明。
三、饼状图图表和柱状图作文的写作要点
1 介绍各扇面及总体的关系。
2 各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较。
3 重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的。
四、综合图图表作文的写作要点
1 不求甚解,不拘泥于细节。
2 分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表。
3 不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系。
4 如何写出雅思图表作文满分
The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002
构思过程:
I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing the question.
I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobacco category has the highest percentages, and leisure/education has the lowest.
Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something to say about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information you select; everyone will do this differently.
I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey has the highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy has the highest figure for clothing/footwear.
So, I'll write a paragraph about Turkey and Italy.
My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and Sweden.
Maybe I'll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first category, Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the lowest figures for the first AND second categories.
I don't need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trend in point 2.
满分范文:
The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.
It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.
Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.
It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.